feedback on my first flash site please

[chamoru]

This is my first full flash site, please take a look and let me know what you
think. I still need to complete the contact page but its pretty much real
close to completio

[L=http://www.s88109558.onlinehome.us/]http://www.s88109558.onlinehome.us/[/L

[_posted.by\(Vern\);]

It looks great. Like the other person said, last week, it look very very
similar to the 2advanced site.

Regards,
--Vern

[RobbieSoule]

It looks nice enough. But it's not that original design-wise. It sort of
has that "template" feel to it. And the mouse over effect on the top
buttons sounds like it was made by a human voice saying "sheewww". Kinda
cheesy.

Just my 2 cents...

[rob|e.9]









"chamoru" <chamoru_1@msn.com> wrote in message
news:c06io8$goh$1@forums.macromedia.com...

> This is my first full flash site, please take a look and let me know what

you

> think. I still need to complete the contact page but its pretty much real
> close to completio
>
>

[L=http://www.s88109558.onlinehome.us/]http://www.s88109558.onlinehome.us/[/
L

>

[Big Christopher]

Hey! I'm a complete newbie......bought the book, trying to get started. But
for what it's worth, if my first web site looked like yours does I'd be over
the moon. To me it looks slick, professional and very easy on the eye. I will
aspire to creating something as good as that

Regards

[tictac]

I think we've seen lots of sites like this one before. Very good for a
first effort tho :)

Big Christopher <christopher.smith14@virgin.net> wrote in message news:<c08f6d$7f6$1@forums.macromedia.com>...

> Hey! I'm a complete newbie......bought the book, trying to get started. But
> for what it's worth, if my first web site looked like yours does I'd be over
> the moon. To me it looks slick, professional and very easy on the eye. I will
> aspire to creating something as good as that
>
> Regards