I need your critics!

[Jules Edouard Moustic]

Hi guys,

I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you could
criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don't like. I need to
know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
Screenshot is available here:
[url]http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg[/url]
Thanks,

J.


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"I haven't lost my mind, it's backed up on my hard drive."

[Linda Rathgeber]

I like the layout. There are too many different color with not enough
contrast between them for me, though. The aqua and periwinkle blue look
nice together. The orange isn't bad as an accent color. I'd like the
orange buttons more if they didn't have the gradient in them. The violet
and pink could be dropped.


Linda Rathgeber
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[Sam Poikail]

The white text in the header is just readable enough to be annoying, but not
readable enough to be useful.

The tail on the little devil is cut off, but then you can see a small piece
of it as it curls back.

You might want to remove the Vaio logo as it is trademarked by Sony.

A little too much gray blank gray space at the bottom.

Remove the line that says "This site best viewed...." People are going to
view your site with whatever they are happy with. They won't change their
browser for you. No matter how nicely you ask ;o) That's just the way it
is.

Cheers,
Sam

"Jules Edouard Moustic" <j.e.m@groland.com> wrote in message
news:bmfp2s$m38di$1@ID-208535.news.uni-berlin.de...

> Hi guys,
>
> I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you

could

> criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don't like. I need to
> know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
> Screenshot is available here:
> [url]http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg[/url]
> Thanks,
>
> J.
>
>
> --
> "I haven't lost my mind, it's backed up on my hard drive."
>
>

[Jules Edouard Moustic]

Thank you guys, I'll take all your comments into account.
J.

"Sam Poikail" <indigo_wolf@SPAMBITEShotmail.com> escreveu na mensagem
news:bmg18d$dhq$1@forums.macromedia.com...

> The white text in the header is just readable enough to be annoying, but

not

> readable enough to be useful.
>
> The tail on the little devil is cut off, but then you can see a small

piece

> of it as it curls back.
>
> You might want to remove the Vaio logo as it is trademarked by Sony.
>
> A little too much gray blank gray space at the bottom.
>
> Remove the line that says "This site best viewed...." People are going to
> view your site with whatever they are happy with. They won't change their
> browser for you. No matter how nicely you ask ;o) That's just the way it
> is.
>
> Cheers,
> Sam
>
> "Jules Edouard Moustic" <j.e.m@groland.com> wrote in message
> news:bmfp2s$m38di$1@ID-208535.news.uni-berlin.de...

> > Hi guys,
> >
> > I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you

> could

> > criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don't like. I need

to

> > know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
> > Screenshot is available here:
> > [url]http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg[/url]
> > Thanks,
> >
> > J.
> >
> >
> > --
> > "I haven't lost my mind, it's backed up on my hard drive."
> >
> >

>
>

[ccnk]

Show us the code Jules! Screenshots mean so litlle without the code.
<copycat></copycat>

;-o

Jules Edouard Moustic wrote:

>Hi guys,
>
>I just created a beta version of a website. I would appreciate if you could
>criticize my work, please *do* tell tell me what you don't like. I need to
>know. Suggestions and comments are welcome.
>Screenshot is available here:
>[url]http://www.abahia.com/beta.version.auriance.jpg[/url]
>Thanks,
>
>J.
>
>
>--
>"I haven't lost my mind, it's backed up on my hard drive."
>
>
>
>

--

Coen

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