My First ever professional site.

[mzosama]

Hi Guyz, I recently made Motorola Motomash site. There are 2 links. U can check
out the sample page which is more updated than the original site. The other
link is the just the copy of sample but in some areas it is still outdated.

[L=Click here for sample site
(Recommended)]http://www.geocities.com/usamazulfiqar/motomash[/L]
[L=Original Site.]http://www.arabiamoto.com[/L]

Plz give me some feedback.
Usama Zulfiqar
[url]www.mzosama.cjb.net[/url]

[fasterthanlight]

whats the difference between the two sites...

any way its a good site!

[Todd]

"fasterthanlight" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> wrote in message
news:c4g1ma$d7s$1@forums.macromedia.com...

> whats the difference between the two sites...
>
> any way its a good site!

Just take it off that godforsaken Geocities and you'll be all set.

[Todd]

"mzosama" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> wrote in message
news:c4fsog$8e5$1@forums.macromedia.com...

> Hi Guyz, I recently made Motorola Motomash site. There are 2 links. U can

check

> out the sample page which is more updated than the original site. The

other

> link is the just the copy of sample but in some areas it is still

outdated.

>
> [L=Click here for sample site
> (Recommended)]http://www.geocities.com/usamazulfiqar/motomash[/L]
> [L=Original Site.]http://www.arabiamoto.com[/L]
>
> Plz give me some feedback.
> Usama Zulfiqar
> [url]www.mzosama.cjb.net[/url]
>

and fix the date at the top right... try to fit it all in. I don't think you
need the time.

[anishu]

site looks gud..
check the mouse over animation u had given to buttons.
especially products and home .. on mouse over the font size is bigger than
other buttons.
& ur identity ' designed by.. its not visible and diff to read

[Joy_kittu]

ok both sites are good..!

+ joy_kittu +
[email]kittu@yours.com[/email]

[mzosama]

Well guyz thanks for the comments. There are some differences in the products
page. Go to Products section>V300>Accessories. This information is only given
on the sample site and not the original site. Yes some of the buttons rollover
have a mistake as they become bigger than the others when the mouse is rolled
over them. Else the music of the was provided by the company and i think its
not so cool. I have requested them to give me some good tune.

[Linda Rathgeber - TMM]

mzosama wrote:

> Hi Guyz, I recently made Motorola Motomash site. There are 2 links. U can check
> out the sample page which is more updated than the original site. The other
> link is the just the copy of sample but in some areas it is still outdated.

At a screen resolution of 1280 x 1024, there is a 1 inch gap between the
content and the gray border.

At first glance, I can't tell if you are selling girls, music, or some
kind of hand held device.


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[kuhsor]

Cool site... quite professional looking....

heres a few suggestions though...with the text that flies in from the sides,
you might want to polish that up a bit. maybe put an alpha fade on it so when
they fly in, they're also coming more into focus. or use jpgs for it with a
motion blur effect on it.....

Mike

[calaway]

What framerate did you design your site in? Things seem to kinda clunk along the page when you rollover a floating image. Good design though.

[zenartist]

It's a nice looking site but I can see a few tweaks here and there. On the
homepage some of the circle buttons have images inside that look a bit rough,
especially the motorola... did you use a raster or vector image? It would
also be nice if when you returned to the homepage the navigation wouldn't
fly-in again. I like the text animations that zoom in and the
photo-manipulations are excellent. I think something fancier could be done
with the rollover states for navigation buttons. Also, I can see when the
musical note animation flips back to the beginning from the half-way point.
Are the graphics used for the top and bottom raster, they look a bit pixelated
and could probably be done in Flash. Excellent transitions with the mask and I
like your color usage.

Keep up the good work.