My site in french, would you go see it??

[Niouze]

"Awklocke" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> a écrit dans le message de news:
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> I just made my site but because I'm french, I did all the texts in that

language. I'd like to receive any comment you'd like to give to me, because
I'm sure there is a lot of things I should improve!

> here it is: [url]http://awklockeontheweb.free.fr[/url]

Salut .

Premiere chose ton site est bien trop grand !!
je suis en 1152*854 et ça passe pas...
en général faut même s'arranger pour que ça passe en 800*600 soit environ
750*450.
La nav est un chouilla compliqué... pour un novice ça va être galère.
Le design est sympa tu as un pt'it talent !
Fait gaffe au chargement entre les pages... je suis en adsl et ça rame entre
tes pages attention, essaye de mettre des preloader entre chaque page sinon
le clique ne réagit pas et on se demande si on a pas planté.

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[Tullsum webforumsuser@macromedia.com]

I had no problem with your movie size, though might want to consider ruducing it for those that browse 800x600 as metioned above.

I love your menu graphic, but I suggest you animate the buttons on it. It's nice and organic, it looks like it wants to unfold. The underlined text that appears as you mouse over doesn't seem to match the feel of the initial image.

Is your RPG project going to be a flash game? (Sorry, can't read French very well)

Good job. Look forward to seeing more of your stuff.

[Awklocke webforumsuser@macromedia.com]

thanks for advices.
In fact I was planning on putting a selection on the first page for the resolution, but I hadn't enough time. I'll do it for sure!
next, animations on the main interface (the round thingy) are planned too. and icons (because I hadn't enough place for the text...)
For the slow appearance of the windows and focus, that's because of the huge texts I use, and I don't know how to fix it (I've already asked [url]http://http://webforums.macromedia.com/flash/messageview.cfm?catid=288&threadid=646250[/url] but nobody has reply!) If you know how to do, it would be very helpful! The reason for th focus is the changes on the text color.

Other than that, there isn't (or nearly) any loading because the whole site is 70 kb large so...
the loading between pages is because Flash Player freezes until it has displayed the new windows. It's my worst problem for the moment.

Next, a RPG is a Role Playing Game. more or less like Final Fantasy games, you might know it! My RPG will be in flash in effect, if I manage to finish it someday! but I'm hopeful!

Thanks and keep on telling me your impressions!
Another thing: I plan on a translation in a moment, so...