New site feedback please,

[privatenews.microsoft.com]

Hi all,

I have been looking at flash mx for 3 weeks ans made a site, its not perfect
I know as its only a first attempt. but fresh eyes make a better judge, Im
having some issues with the booking form formatting the final email, ive
been actualy building it for a whole week so im sorta tired of looking at
it.

[url]http://www.sw-iba.org.uk/whind.htm[/url]

the sites at the above url for testing.

[ladyluna]

Hi there,
I like the colors of the site, and the floating bubbles. The fish at the
beginning is really cool. There are some things that bother me, though. First
of all, the text hanging out the sides of the bubbles doesn't look good. I like
the color effect of the text under the bubble, but if you are going to have
this bubble, it should either contain the text. Maybe you could use a mask so
the corners don't show. Also, in the dive charter, the flashing images are much
too abrupt to go with the rest of the site. Consider fading them in and out.
Soften it up a bit so that it matches with the overall site design. Consider
making your bubble on the booking form a little larger so it contains the form.
The form is just touching the edges, which creates this tension. Hope this
helps!
Luna

[ladyluna]

Sorry, one more thing. The logo is really bitmapped. Can you smooth that out a bit?
Luna