Site Critique

[ladyluna]

Hi all,
Would you please critique my site, it is only partially flash, but I would still appreciate your comments.
Thanks,
luna

[plecoguy]

Where is it?

RR

[ladyluna]

Yeah, that would help:
[L=MySite]http://63.225.252.5/rwco/index.html[/L]

Sorry!

[Ed Massey]

Hi Ladyluna,

Reviewed on PC IE5+ and NN7, 512Kbps, Fplayer7

Flash video is fine - distingtive and crisp, but for the length of pre-load
I think you ought to make more of it once you are inside the main site.

1. The header section.
It feels a little cramped up top: a little white space above the very
top maybe? Although this cramped feeling maybe due to point 3 (see below).

2. The 'Our Approach' section....
Why are you using a scroll box? - This is a little irritating as you have
to horizontal and vertical scroll in both NN & IE.
It seems that you are writing this to appear in an envelope-sized window -
if so fine - just format the scrolling content so the user does not need to
horizontal scroll, else get rid of the scoll box.

3. General alignment...
The right-hand edges of you banner image, top nav and text content dont
align - i reckon it'd look better-contained if they did.
The left-hand edges of the main body of text-content, the contact line and
the ©-notice don't align either.... just looks a little untidy.

4. link colours - not so sure about the tone of the green text links - maybe
try to match it to the tone of the section title (that appears under the
horizontal graphic).
And less sure about the red roll-over colour.

Apart from my minor gripes I think your imagery is well presented and tight.
Good luck!

Ed

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first of all you should go and optimize all the images... there are huge :(


"ladyluna" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> wrote in message
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> Yeah, that would help:
> [L=MySite]http://63.225.252.5/rwco/index.html[/L]
>
> Sorry!

[ladyluna]

Thank you both for your comments and suggestions. Much appreciated!
luna